Tuesday, June 24, 2025

Opening Lines


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Angela Raines


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I thought it might be fun to share some opening lines from books I've read over the years. Some are recent, while others date back to a long time ago. What do you think of how these various authors begin their stories?


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"The drenching cloudburst ended as abruptly as it had begun."  A Pride of Men - Peter Dawson, Bantam Books


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"He was asleep and then he was awake." Utah Blaine - Louis L'Amour, Bantam Books


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" "What do you care, anyway?" asked Reeve-Howard philosophically."  The Lure of Dim Trails - B.M. Bower, G.W. Dillingham Company


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"The pendulous lip of rock overhang cast a silhouette of sylvan shade down across the walls of the Spruce Mountains and out in a pointed, arrowhead shape over the range of Reno Balfor." Terror Trail - Lauran Paine, Leisure Books

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"My father spread his homesickness like a disease." My Heart Lies Here - Laurie Marr Wasmund, Lost Ranch Books



"The horse herd broke and began its run right after topping the crest of the pass." Black Rock Desert - L.P. Holmes, Blackstone Publishing


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"It was a time of great and exalting excitement." The War Prayer - Mark Twain  


What are some opening story lines you remember, or perhaps like or dislike, excluding "It was a dark and stormy night."

Until next time.

Doris

 

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10 comments:

  1. Oh gosh, Dori! How about this one from Gone With the Wind? "Scarlett O'Hara was not beautiful, but men seldom realized it when caught by her charm as the Tarleton twins were.” I read this book when I was 12, and I will say, this opening line hooked me!

    Here's another one, from To Kill a Mockingbird, probably my most favorite book of all: "When he was nearly thirteen my brother Jem got his arm badly broken at the elbow." Yep--I had to read on and find out what had happened to Jem!

    Great topic. I'll be thinking of this tomorrow--and I just might be back! LOL

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    1. Love those. I hope you come back, because I want more books to read. LOL Doris

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  2. I think the line is: "It was the best of time, and the worst of times." Hope I got that right?

    Jim Williams...

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    1. You nailed it, Jim. "A Tale of Two Cities" by Charles Dickens. A classic opening line. Doris

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  3. Love the photos capturing the spirit of the opening lines! For me, memorable opening lines aren't necessarily beautiful ones, but they capture the reader's attention. An example is one I remember from Mickey Spillane's Vengeance is Mine! (1950):
    "The guy was dead as hell."

    Another one is from Dhalgren, a trippy science fiction epic by Samuel R. Delany. The opening line is "to wound the autumnal city." It doesn't make much sense until you reach the book's last line (800+ pages later): "But I still hear them walking in the trees: not speaking. Waiting here, away from the terrifying weaponry, out of the halls of vapor and light, beyond holland into the hills, I have come to" at which point you realize it's an endless loop. James Joyce did the same thing in Finnegan's Wake, but I can't think of any other examples.

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    1. Thank you for the kind words about my photos. It is a passionate hobby for me. I also love the Spillane line. Fabulous. To me great and memorable first lines come from so many genres, I will have to check the stories your lines come from. Doris

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  4. "Blood is what he remembered." Billy the Kid: the Legend of El Chivato is my favorite.

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    1. That is a good one. Thank you for posting it. Doris

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  5. Good stuff! Who doesn't have a quote from reading any quality book? But being quoted, ahh that is the essence of success!

    Doris McCraw has a heart and a soul that reaches all of us. Deeply in love with reading, writing, sharing, and caring---those qualities keep shining through in this very special Western Fictioneers member.

    Thank you, Doris.

    Charlie Steel

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    1. It is always a pleasure, Charlie. I've always believed that sharing is great way to create community. As the community grows, ie. the Western Genre, the more works available and a growth of readers who find favorite new authors and stories. The more we share, the more we all can grow. (That's my 'soapbox' speech for tonight. :) ) Doris

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