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Wednesday, June 21, 2023
REVISITING THE MAN WHO SHOT LIBERTY VALANCE by CHERYL PIERSON
Favorite western movies? I’ve got a few. But if I had to choose, I think it would have to be The Man Who Shot Liberty Valance.
This Hollywood classic, starring John Wayne as Tom Doniphon, Lee Marvin as Liberty Valance, Vera Miles as Hallie Ericson, and Jimmy Stewart as Ransom “Ranse” Stoddard has just about everything a western cinema fan could hope for: action, romance, right-over-might…and an unforgettable theme song.
Dorothy M. Johnson’s short story was made into a movie in 1962. It’s one of my oldest “movie” memories, as I was five years old when it made the rounds to the movie theaters and drive-ins.
Here’s the description of the movie according to Wickipedia:b>
Elderly U.S. Senator Ransom "Ranse" Stoddard and his wife Hallie arrive by train in the small western town of Shinbone, to attend the funeral of an apparent nobody, a local rancher named Tom Doniphon. Prior to the funeral, Hallie goes off with a friend to visit a burned-down house with obvious significance to her. As they pay their respects to the dead man at the undertaker's establishment, the senator is interrupted with a request for a newspaper interview. Stoddard grants the request.
As the interview with the local reporter begins, the film flashes back several decades as Stoddard reflects on his first arrival at Shinbone by stagecoach to establish a law practice.
A gang of outlaws, led by gunfighter Liberty Valance, hold up the stagecoach. Stoddard is brutally beaten, left for dead and later rescued by Doniphon. Stoddard is nursed back to health by restaurant owner Peter Ericson (John Qualen), his wife Nora (Jeanette Nolan) and daughter Hallie. It later emerges that Hallie is Doniphon's love interest.
Shinbone's townsfolk are regularly menaced by Valance and his gang. Cowardly local marshal Link Appleyard (Andy Devine) is ill prepared and unwilling to enforce the law. Doniphon is the only local courageous enough to challenge Valance's lawless behavior.
"You, Liberty...I said YOU pick it up..."
On one occasion, Doniphon even intervenes on Stoddard's behalf, when Valance publicly humiliates the inept Easterner. Valance trips Stoddard who is waiting tables at Peter's restaurant. Stoddard spills Doniphon's order causing Doniphon to intervene. Valance stands down and leaves. Doniphon tells Stoddard he needs to either leave the territory or buy a gun. Stoddard says he will do neither.
Stoddard is an advocate for justice under the law, not man. He earns the respect and affection of Hallie when he offers to teach her to read after he discovers, to her embarrassment, she's had no formal education. Stoddard's influence on Hallie and the town is further evidenced when he begins a school for the townspeople with Hallie's help. But, secretly, Stoddard borrows a gun and practices shooting.
Doniphon shows Stoddard his plans for expanding his house in anticipation of marrying Hallie, and reminds him that Hallie is his girl. Doniphon gives Stoddard a shooting lesson but humiliates him by shooting a can of paint which spills on Stoddard's suit. Doniphon warns that Valance will be just as devious, but Stoddard hits him in the jaw and leaves.
In Shinbone, the local newspaper editor-publisher Dutton Peabody (Edmond O'Brien) writes a story about local ranch owners' opposition to the territory's potential statehood. Valance convinces the ranchers that if they will hire him, he can get elected as a delegate to represent the cattlemen's interest. Shinbone's residents meet to elect two delegates to send to the statehood convention at the territorial capital. Valance attempts to bully the townspeople into electing him as a delegate. Eventually, Stoddard and Peabody are chosen. Valance assaults and badly beats Peabody after Peabody publishes two unflattering articles about Valance and his gang. The villains destroy Peabody's office. Valance also calls Stoddard out for a duel later in the evening after Valance loses his bid for delegate. Valance leaves saying "Don't make us come and get you!" Doniphon tells Stoddard he should leave town and even offers to have his farmhand, Pompey, escort him. But when Stoddard sees that Peabody has been nearly beaten to death, he calls out Valance. Stoddard then retrieves a carefully wrapped gun from under his bed and heads toward the saloon where Valance is. Valance hears he has been called out and justifies going out in self-defense. His wins his last poker hand before the duel with Aces and Eights.
"Pompey..."
In the showdown, Valance toys with Stoddard by firing a bullet near his head and then wounding him in the arm, which causes Stoddard to drop his gun. Valance allows Stoddard to bend down and retrieve the gun. Valance then aims to kill Stoddard promising to put the next bullet "right between the eyes," when Stoddard fires and miraculously kills Valance with one shot to the surprise of everyone, including himself. Hallie responds with tearful affection. Doniphon congratulates Stoddard on his success, and notices how Hallie lovingly cares for Stoddard's wounds.
Sensing that he has lost Hallie's affections, Doniphon gets drunk in the saloon and drives out Valance's gang, who have been calling for Stoddard to be lynched for Valance's "murder." The barman tries to tell Doniphon's farmhand Pompey (Woody Strode) that he cannot be served (due to his race), to which Doniphon angrily shouts: "Who says he can't? Pour yourself a drink, Pompey." Pompey instead drags Doniphon home, where the latter sets fire to an uncompleted bedroom he was adding to his house in anticipation of marrying Hallie. The resulting fire destroys the entire house.
Stoddard is hailed as "The Man Who Shot Liberty Valance" and based on this achievement, is nominated as the local representative to the statehood convention. Stoddard is reluctant to serve based upon his notoriety for killing a man in a gunfight. At this point, in a flashback within the original flashback, Doniphon tells Stoddard that it was he (Doniphon), hidden across the street, who shot and killed Valance in cold blood, and not Stoddard in self-defense. Stoddard finds Doniphon and asks him why he shot Valance. He did it for Hallie, he says, because he understood that "she's your girl now". Doniphon encourages Stoddard to accept the nomination: "You taught her to read and write, now give her something to read and write about!"
Stoddard returns to the convention and is chosen as representative. He marries Hallie and eventually becomes the governor of the new state. He then becomes a two term U.S. senator, then the American ambassador to Great Britain, a U.S. senator again, and at the time of Doniphon's funeral is the favorite for his party's nomination as vice president.
The film returns to the present day and the interview ends. The newspaper man, understanding now the truth about the killing of Valance, burns his notes stating: "This is the West, sir. When the legend becomes fact, print the legend."
"Hallie, who put the cactus rose on Tom's coffin?"
Stoddard and Hallie board the train for Washington, melancholy about the lie that led to their prosperous life. With the area becoming more and more civilized, Stoddard decides, to Hallie's delight, to retire from politics and return to the territory to set up a law practice. When Stoddard thanks the train conductor for the train ride and the many courtesies extended to him by the railroad, the conductor says, "Nothing's too good for the man who shot Liberty Valance!" Upon hearing the comment, Stoddard and his wife stare off thoughtfully into the distance.
As a side note, one of the many reasons this film holds a special place in my heart is because I remember it as being the first time I made the connection between a scene onscreen representing a flashback. Remember the “flashback within a flashback” that the Wikipedia article mentions? The smoke from John Wayne’s cigarette moves and flows to take over the screen as he tells Jimmy Stewart, “You didn’t kill Liberty Valance. Think back…” That smoke took us back to the truth of what had happened, and my five-year-old brain was shocked—and enamored, even then, with the idea that time passage, or remembrances could be shown through the haze of cigarette smoke. It was the moment of truth for Ransom Stoddard.
For me, The Man Who Shot Liberty Valance embodies the core of the west—good and evil, and how sometimes “the point of a gun was the only law”—and it all depended on the man who held the weapon.
Liberty represented the purest evil. Ranse was determined to fight him with the law he treasured—the desire to do things the legal way blinding him to the fact that Liberty didn’t respect that. In the beginning, his naivete is almost painful to watch, providing Liberty some rich entertainment. Though Tom finds it amusing, his growing respect for Ranse’s perseverance is portrayed to perfection by that familiar downward glance of John Wayne’s. Accompanied by the half-smile and his slow advice-giving drawl, the character of Tom Doniphon is drawn so that by the point at which he sees the handwriting on the wall and burns down the house he built for Hallie, the viewer’s sympathy shifts, briefly, to the circumstances Tom finds himself in.
But Ranse is determined to vanquish Valance one way or the other—with a lawbook or a gun—whatever it takes. In the final showdown, the lines of resignation are etched in Tom Doniphon’s face, and we know he is honor-bound to do the thing he’ll regret forever: save Ranse Stoddard’s life and lose Hallie to him.
I love the twist. Ranse truly believes he’s killed Valance. Again, to do the honorable thing, Tom tells him the truth about what really happened.
What do you think? If you were Ranse, would you want to know you really were not the man who shot Liberty Valance? Or would you want to be kept in the dark? If you were Tom, would you have ever told him? It’s a great movie!
Now you can sing along!
THE MAN WHO SHOT LIBERTY VALANCE
When Liberty Valance rode to town the womenfolk would hide, they'd hide
When Liberty Valance walked around the men would step aside
'cause the point of a gun was the only law that Liberty understood
When it came to shootin' straight and fast---he was mighty good.
>From out of the East a stranger came, a law book in his hand, a man
The kind of a man the West would need to tame a troubled land
'cause the point of a gun was the only law that Liberty understood
When it came to shootin' straight and fast---he was mighty good.
Many a man would face his gun and many a man would fall
The man who shot Liberty Valance, he shot Liberty Valance
He was the bravest of them all.
The love of a girl can make a man stay on when he should go, stay on
Just tryin' to build a peaceful life where love is free to grow
But the point of a gun was the only law that Liberty understood
When the final showdown came at last, a law book was no good.
Alone and afraid she prayed that he'd return that fateful night, aww that night
When nothin' she said could keep her man from goin' out to fight
>From the moment a girl gets to be full-grown the very first thing she learns
When two men go out to face each other only one retur-r-r-ns
Everyone heard two shots ring out, a shot made Liberty fall
The man who shot Liberty Valance, he shot Liberty Valance
He was the bravest of them all.
The man who shot Liberty Valance, he shot Liberty Valance
He was the bravest of them all.
It's been so long since I've seen it. I should give it a rewatch. (Charles Gramlich)
ReplyDeleteI mentioned I saw this the first time when I was really too young to even know what was happening that much. But I've watched it several times since then over the years, and I always see something else I didn't see before. I hope you will watch it again!
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DeleteGreat story. A contrast of order and anarchy. I read this flick was filmed in black and white because Wayne and Stewart were in their 50s and they wouldn't have been able to get away with playing characters in their 30s if it had been filmed in color.
DeleteI loved this movie so much, as you might be able to tell...LOL I didn't know that about why it was filmed in black and white. I'm glad it was, though, oddly enough, because it lent a better feel to it than color might have. I'm a sucker for those old movies. I love those kinds of little tidbits of info!
DeleteI agree, Cheryl, I can't imagine this in color. Black and white made such an impact.
DeleteIt really was perfection!
DeleteI felt so sorry for Tom I almost cried. A wonderful movie based on a short story by a very talented writer. Thanks, Cheryl!
ReplyDeleteI agree, Vicky. I felt sorry for him, too, but he saw the writing on the wall and what was best for everyone--except himself. :((( It always amazes me how so many short stories are made into such wonderful movies.
Delete“This is the West, sir. When the legend becomes
Deletefact, print the legend.”
from The Man Who Shot Liberty Valance
(Director John Ford)
This is such a great snippet. Such a perfect way for it to end, because that was exactly what happened, and it affected everything.
DeleteA great choice for a favorite, Cheryl. And a great choice for a topic. Thank you for your (characteristically) excellent examination of it.
ReplyDeleteAwww, thank you, John. I posted this a long while back, but thought it might be time for a rerun in case people had not seen it or had forgotten. It is just such a wonderful movie, once in a while I will run it again as a reminder! LOL
DeleteI found this to be one of the only, if not only, plots with two heroes in conflict. I thought it was the best script ever written.
ReplyDeleteYou are so right. I love the MOVIE script. But if you read the short story, it's almost like you're reading a different tale altogether. This is one of the very very rare instances where the movie is better than the book or short story it was made from. And that's not to say I don't like Dorothy M. Johnson as a writer, because I really do--I was just terribly disappointed in that particular story. But yes, I agree, that movie script really was great!
DeleteI need to watch it again--it's been a very long time. Yesterday (or the day before; we're traveling and kind of missed a day in there) I watched The Fabelman's on a flight to Rome, and in that movie the young man who's essentially Steven Spielberg watches TMWSLV, then later meets John Ford in a great scene. That reminded me that I need to see it, and now you've reminded me again. Time to make it happen!
ReplyDeleteAh! Serendipity! LOL Yes, I think these are "signs" that you really need to watch it again, Jeff! I see something different, or "more", every time I see it. Safe travels!
DeleteA great film one of the best westerns.
ReplyDeleteTerry, I totally agree! It has stood the test of time!
DeleteBetter late than not at all. Like 'The Ox-Bow Incident' this movie gets better with each viewing.
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HAHAHAAA! OMG, I can't tell you how often I've thought that same thing about better late than never --because many times it IS never, so I must congratulate myself when I do actually comment. I read so many blogs but my phone does not cooperate with commenting usually. Anyhow, YES, I'd forgotten about "The Ox-Bow Incident"!!! That's one I'd like to watch again!
DeleteCheryl, I love this movie, too. I used this short story when I was teaching English/literature as one of the three reading exposures to the western genre. The other two were Shane and Down the Long Hills by Louis L'Amour. Back to Liberty Valance: Little side ditty. The phrase 'south of the Picketwire' means south of the Purgatorire River (also Purgatory River, which is a river that runs through south central Colorado not far from me. Local legend has it that Picketwire is an American pronunciation for either the French (fur trappers) pronunciation which is Purgatoire (Purr - gah - twah ... said with a western drawl becomes Picketwire) or the Spanish name Rio de las Animas en Purgatorio.
ReplyDeleteOh, I have not ever read Down the Long Hills! Now I must do that! I used to use Conagher when I taught creative writing classes. That was so much fun! Love the "little side ditty" you included. I had no idea! Purgatory reminds me of that other fantastic western movie called...PURGATORY! LOL A great western film with some wonderful mysticism. Glad you stopped by, Kaye!
DeleteI haven't seen this movie in forever! I should rewatch it as well. There's just so much excellent writing and acting in this film. It makes you proud to be a Western author.
ReplyDeleteJES, I just look forward to watching it (and some of the other favorites) again because of the things I notice that I didn't see the first 100 times I watched! LOL Yes, lots of excellent writing.
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