For a long time I wanted to write about one particular Saturday afternoon in the 1970s. Last year that idea became a story, "One Against a Gun Horde."
In
those years I lived with my parents on a Nebraska acreage that sat on a hill,
overlooking a creek valley grassland. About a mile to the
southwest sat a small group of buildings we rented for livestock. Cattle grazed in
the pasture. Hogs lived in the barns. A gravel road ran parallel with our
homestead. Half a mile away, a right turn would take you half a mile to the
other place.
So
on this one sunny, summer Saturday, my dad and I were walking across our open
yard, heading to the house for coffee, when we heard a gunshot. Then
another.
It
was the middle of summer. Not hunting season. And the thunder echoing up
through the cedars and cottonwoods from the other place didn't come from a BB
gun or even a .22 rifle.
This
was high powered stuff.
We
held up our hands to shield our eyes from the sun and searched the horizon.
The
shooters weren’t hard to find. Their bright red pickup was a give away, parked
in the ditch at the other place.
Taking
off in a run, Dad said over his shoulder, "Get in the pickup.” I followed,
feet dragging a little, while my heart picked up the pace. "Call the dog,"
he said
"Where
are we going?" Like I didn't know. I got our German Shepherd into the box,
and we jumped into our ancient blue Ford.
Dad
turned the key, but before throwing the pickup into gear, he said, "Sons a
bitches are too close to the hogs and cattle to be shootin'." His face was
red, he was breathing hard, holding his voice down to a low growl.
"We're
going down there?!?!"
I
thought he'd lost his mind.
He
thought I'd lost mine for the question.
We
were both partly right.
"Dad.
They've got guns," I said. "They've got guns." Trying to be
extra dramatic.
"Oh
yeah," he said, flinging open his door. Seconds later he was back with a
single barrel shotgun that was older than the truck. "Hold onto
that," he said.
Spinning
gravel, we set out to confront the weekend gunnies, whoever they were, with an ancient shotgun, one
shell, and a barking German Shepherd.
Less
than a minute later, braking sideways on the gravel road, Dad deliberately
spraying rocks at the parked red pickup, I decided it could've been worse.
I
only saw two guys.
Then
I decided it could've been better.
Each
of the bearded men were bigger than dad and me combined. Each held a rifle.
"Do
you know 'em?" said Dad. "Because I sure as hell don't." As if I
hung around with bearded rednecks who were at least twice my age.
I
shook my head, but he was already out of the pickup, stomping toward them. I
decided to leave the shotgun in the cab.
When
I joined them, I got a surprise.
Dad
sure as hell did know 'em.
In
fact, he'd gone to school with one of the men, and rode to Army basic training
with the other.
Just
like that, the anger was gone, all was forgiven, and it was old home week.
And
like every kid left standing alone while a parent yuks it up with old friends,
I immediately wanted to be someplace else.
So
while I waited around and toed the dirt, I started to imagine how things
might've been different.
What
it these guys hadn't been old pals? What if they'd tried something? How would
my dad act? How would I act?
That's
the premise of “One Against a Gun Horde,” that interplay between real life and
fiction, and it served as an origin story of sorts. For a while now I've
written about a character named John Coburn who some folks know as "The
Peregrine" thanks to a series of dime adventure stories written about him
"back east."
But
who wrote those stories about Coburn? And why? Here's the answer, and the
afternoon incident above is where it all started.
After growing up on a Nebraska farm, Richard Prosch worked as a
professional writer, artist, and teacher in Wyoming, South Carolina, and
Missouri. His western
crime fiction captures the fleeting history and lonely frontier stories
of his youth where characters aren’t always what they seem, and the
windburned landscapes are filled with swift, deadly danger. Read more at www.RichardProsch.com
Real life/ fiction. Nicely done and thanks. Doris
ReplyDeleteInteresting "story behind the story", Richard. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks much! Harlan Ellison used to write these kinds of anecdotes before his stories, and I liked them better than the stories!
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ReplyDeleteNice look at where story ideas begin.
ReplyDeleteI love when authors do this. I always try to do it. I also got hooked on it by reading Ellison's comments on his stories like this.
ReplyDeleteI like to think that fiction based on real-life experiences just sounds a little more authentic. It would have remained an "almost adventure" if not for your writerly imagination.
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