Showing posts with label Western Fictioners. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Western Fictioners. Show all posts

Sunday, February 24, 2013

The dean of western short story writers


Cheryl told me to blog about a short story. To me, when someone says “Western short story,” one man’s name comes to mind.

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He came to ride for her pa’s ranch, a tall slim man, quiet yet strong, and he always meant what he said. That was new to Ellis, and it wasn’t long before she fell in love with the cowboy and wanted to marry him.

She knew her father, maybe better than he knew himself. The cowboy wanted to ask for her hand, but she said her father would never allow them to marry. But they did. And they settled down on a little spread he’d bought with money he’d saved up from when he rode as a scout for the Army. Just an adobe hut with a simple ramada. Just thirty yearlings to start with. Just somewhere hard work and patience could build a place for a family to live in peace. Just a place.

Then the old man rode in with a rifle across the saddlebows and five men at his back. He’d not married until forty and the girl was his only child. Not a girl to marry a ne’er-do-well cowboy who was more like a redskin than a white man. Not that. She’d marry a man capable of building further on what her father had already built. She would. She surely would.

“Where is he?”

“He’s at the stock tank,” she said, “but he’ll come in now.”

“Whether he does or not,” the old man said, “you’re coming home with me.”

“I’m married now, Pa.”

“Don’t talk foolish.”

“Married in Willson. By a priest.”

“We’ll talk about that at home.”

“I am home!”

“Girl, this isn’t going to be a public debate.”

“Then why did you bring an audience?”


The man’s name that came to mind when Cheryl said “Short story?”

   
Elmore Leonard, of course. You know him for 3:10 to Yuma. Valdez is Coming was also a short story to begin with. Originally, this story was entitled The Waiting Man, but in the collection of Elmore Leonard’s short stories, the title is Moment of Vengeance.

How many stories have you read where the protagonist goes in with both fists slamming into those who oppose him, or where he jerks out a Colt SSA .45 and blasts baddies to oblivion, or where he leads them out into the desert where they die a terrible death of thirst? So many. So many.

But this one is different. As the title says, there’s a moment of revenge. It comes because the man Ellis chose to be her mate was patient. He held no disrespect for her father. He was rough with a couple of riders while he was being patient, but never on camera.

Then the old man came after him with shotgun across his lap. They talked. Then talked some more. Her man was patient.


“I’m anxious to see my wife,” the man said.

The old man’s face came up, out of the shadow, deep-lined and solemn, but the hard tightness was gone from his jaw. He shifted his weight and came down off the saddle, and on the ground, he handed the shotgun to her husband. “This damn thing’s getting too heavy to hold,” he said.


You’ll have to go find the story if you want to know what finally happened. But it wouldn’t matter what Elmore Leonard short story you picked up to read. He's the dean, and it’d be a good one.

Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Wicked Wednesday (Antagonists who have ethics)


Okay. What’s a half-breed like me to do?

Many of my novels either star a half-breed or have half-breed supporting actors. They run into trouble they’re not looking for at every turn.

Someone commented in their review of Pitchfork Justice that I used first-person and third-person narrators in the book. That’s something I picked up from Louis L’Amour. I figured if the master could do it, the disciple was allowed to. Let me show you how Falan Wilder gets in trouble.

“Your kind don’t belong with regular folks. Git.”
“Reckon my cash is the same color as yours,” I said with my best poker face. “I’ve got another dollar. Buy you a drink. This Old Potrero ain’t bad booze.” I waved at the bar. “How ‘bout it?” I didn’t really want to tangle with the big man, but I wouldn’t back down either, not on account of my skin color, anyway.
He spit on the floor and moved closer. “Git. Or they’ll carry you out.”
I turned my back to him. Slowly. Deliberately. “Pour that whiskey, bar man,” I said. “Now.” I pushed the silver dollar at him.
He stood stock still, eyes darting from me to the big man behind me.
A click came as the big man thumbed back the hammer of his .45. I whirled to my right, snaking out my Bowie and slashing through his bicep with its 14-inch blade as I turned. My left fist smashed into his square jaw as my momentum carried me past. The .45 clattered to the floor.
The big guy fell to his knees, clutching his half-severed arm with his big left hand. “You miserable sumbitch.” He mumbled the words. “Sumbitch. You. Cut. Me!” Blood pumped down his arm to drip off his splayed fingers. 
“Feel lucky I didn’t cut your miserable throat,” I said. “Get that bound up,” I said to the ‘keep, “or he’ll bleed out.” I picked up the bar towel and wiped the Bowie’s blade clean. “Keep the extra dollar. I was just leaving.” The Winchester came natural to my hand, and I jacked a cartridge into its chamber.
It seemed an awful long way to the door, but I forced myself to walk normal, not too fast, not too slow, the rifle under my arm.
As I neared the door, the barkeep called out. “Reed Fowley’s got family,” he said. “They’ll be wanting to know who done this to their brother and son. What should they call you?”
I stopped with a hand on the door. “Same as everyone else,” I said. “They can call me Breed.”

So Wilder is in trouble. He’s seriously cut a Fowley Family member, and chances are, he figures, they’ll come riding after him. He heads for the desert. He even tries to talk sense to the Fowleys.

“Fowley!” I hollered. I was out of sight and the rocks would scatter my voice, making it hard for the Fowleys to pinpoint my position.
The horses stopped, but the riders said nothing.
“Fowley!”
“I’ll be Sean Fowley,” a solid voice with an Irish brogue said. “Ya cut me son. Ya’ll pay.”
“Your son held a Colt’s revolver at my back, Fowley. Was I Johnny Ringo, he’d be dead.”
“Ya ain’t nothing but a breed. Breed’s got no right to cut me boy.”
“Sean Fowley. Hear me. I could have cut Reed Fowley’s throat as easily as I cut his arm, but I don’t hold to killing people. I’ll go a long way to keep from having to kill a man, but I’ve got my limits.”
A whoop of laughter came from where the horses were stopped. “Hey Breed. My name’s Bud Fowley, and me and my brother Thad, well, we’re just plain gonna slit your throat . . . or maybe hang you, breed bastard, that’s all there is to it.”
“Fowleys! All of you. Hear me, and hear me good. I was just passing through your town, not even gonna spend the night, but your brainless brother took it into his head to run me out. I don’t run worth a damn.”
The third man spoke. “Breeds gotta stay with they own kind. You drunk at the cantina in Mex town, you’d live. Now you’ll die.” The words were brave, but the voice was a bit shaky.
“John Walker,” I called.
I heard a grunt.
“You know of me, Walker. The desert is my friend. Take those who pay you back to Ehrenburg. I will not kill them, but if they follow me, soon they will wish to die.”
“Shut up, Breed,” the old man said. “John Walker’s the best. Ye have no kind of edge. Ye’ll hang. I swear it.”
I slipped from the rock formation on soundless feet. They’d wait for me to answer, and that would give me enough time to get Zeeb away and into the maze of arroyos that slice up the desert of the Mojave.


Notice, now, that Sean Fowley said no one could cut his son without paying. So the whole Fowley family is out for Wilder’s blood. Fowley’s an Irish immigrant. He’s been in much the same position as Wilder, just because he’s Irish. He grew up in the Five Points area of New York City, having come to the U.S. in the wake of the Irish Potato Famine. There, he learned that others could not be allowed to hurt one of his own.

Fowley reacted by pulling Meaghan close behind him and reaching for the shillelagh he habitually carried stuffed under his belt at the small of his back. “Who’ll be asking?” he said.
Four burly men stepped into the street ahead of Fowley and Meaghan. “This is Daybreak Boys territory now, Mick, and we’ll be teaching you to stay in your own place.”
Fowley made no answer. He merely watched the four spread out and stalk toward him. He shifted his grip on the shillelagh and pushed Meaghan into a corner formed by one building protruding farther toward the street than its neighbor. “Stay here,” he said.
The shillelagh in Fowley’s hand became a living thing. It darted out and connected with the point of the nearest Daybreak Boy’s jaw. The crack of splintering bone sounded loud in the instance of silence following the blow. Then the man screamed and fell to his knees, clutching his broken face.
“Now ye’ll pay, bastard Mick,” yelled another Boy, charging Fowley with a six-inch knife held low.
Fowley grinned like a death mask. His oaken shillelagh swept through the air with an audible swish to smash into the forearm of the Boy’s knife arm. The weapon went spinning and Fowley backhanded his truncheon to the side to the Boy’s head. He crumpled like a bundle of rags topped by his silk top hat.
Now the odds were only two to one, and Fowley’s face wore a steel-hard mask of hate.
“Ye’ll not touch one of mine, bugger boys,” he growled. “Come on. Taste me shillelagh of good oak. Try to chastise this Mick.” He stared at each Daybreak Boy’s face. These men he would not forget.
They hesitated.
“Fight, or be gone,” Fowley roared.
They ran.
At the camp near Tinajas Altos, Fowley tasted the victory of that long-ago fight. He remembered rallying a gang of Roach Guards and hunting the offending Daybreak Boys down and destroying them. When someone pushed your boundaries, they must be destroyed. Fowley considered his two sons and laid plans to destroy the man called Breed.

So, we see, Sean Fowley is not a “bad” man, although he is a very hard one. While others went to work on railroad gangs and in the mines, Fowley used the skills he learned at the Shamrock pub in New York to offer feed and drink to those who did the physical work. And he taught his sons his ethic. No one touches one of ours without paying for it. At the beginning, he sees only a half-breed insolent who cut his son. That made the Breed someone who must be crushed. Before the end of the book, he learns that there is much that does not meet the eye when you look only at a man’s skin color. Something he perhaps should have been aware of from his own experience.

As always, I’ll pick a winner from among the commenters to this blog post to receive a PDF version of A Man Called Breed.