(This is an excerpt from L.J. Martin's book WRITE COMPELLING FICTION, reprinted with his permission. Thanks, Larry!)
Anyone who has a basic understanding of the structure of
written English or is willing to learn—and has a story to tell, or the
imagination to make one up—can write and sell a novel.
First
you must want to.
I sold
my first paperback western, Tenkiller, to Zebra Books
(Kensington), many years ago. My second, Mojave Showdown, was picked up by the same company.
Together, my wife and I wrote and sold Tin Angel, a western romance, to Avon. To
Bantam Books, I've sold the westerns El Lazo, Against the 7th Flag, The
Devils Bounty, and The Benicia Belle. In addition,
Bantam published my historical, Rush to Destiny. My next was a Double
D hardback, a novel of the West, Shadow of the Grizzly. Bantam also
brought it out as a paperback. Kensington Books, under their Pinnacle imprint,
published my Blood Mountain, Condor Canyon, Stranahan, McKeag’s Mountain, Wolf
Mountain, McCreed’s Law, Sounding Drum (hardback), it’s paperback
version Last Stand, and Crimson
Hit and Bullet
Blues both of
which were co-written with my good friend Bob Burton, who is actually America’s
No. 1 bounty hunter with over 3,000 arrests to his credit. Since that time I’ve
published many, both fiction and non-fiction, see my webpage. And now, with the
advent of eBooks, anyone can publish.
Kat, as
I’ve mentioned, is published in several foreign countries in romantic suspense
and historical romance, and our joint western-romance effort Tin
Angel is published in Norway. I'm published in large print with most of my books and am
privileged to work with Books in Motion who published my works in audio.
My wife
is a very successful romance writer. Kat's sold an equal number of historical
romances to several publishers—many of her novels have appeared on the best
seller lists.
We did
it. You can do it.
I am not
a college graduate. Family took me away from college in my junior year. In
English I would probably test in the middle (my loving wife would say lower) of
a group of college freshmen and be stuck in the bone-head class. But I'm
willing to look up what I don't know, and I'm willing to take the time
necessary to make sure my work is neatly presented to the reader—the first of
whom will be an editor who will say yes or no to buying the work.
And all
of the above is much easier now, with spell and grammar checker on the
computer.
And
every day I enjoy writing more than the day before. It continues to come
easier—and it's more financially rewarding.
It'll
never be perfect.
Writing
is not a science, it’s a craft, an art. Two and two in writing doesn’t always
add up to four.
I keep
learning every day. Who knows? If I do it long enough, maybe I can enter
college and not have to take bone-head English! Writers learn by doing, every
time they sit down and face the blank page.
You've
got a great story. We all do. You have to be willing to take the time to get it
on paper in a clear and legible manner and with reasonably good English so the
editors read past the first two pages. Even the best of stories—most compelling
or exciting or touching—may go unread, and unsold, due to misspellings and
typographical errors in the first couple of pages. Many editors, most in fact,
justifiably feel that if you are sloppy in your technical skills and
presentation, odds are you're sloppy in all other aspects of your writing.
But more
about that later.
When I
first picked up a pencil and yellow pad, I had little knowledge of spelling or
sentence structure. I found a little time, a dictionary, and some harsh
critics, and all (mostly Kat) contributed to the eventual sale of my first
western novel. My first novel, a historical, lingered on the shelf for many
years before I made a buck from it.
The
chief excuse for non-achievers in all areas of endeavor is, "I just don't
have the time." Horse hocky! We all waste time. We watch T.V. We ride in the car
and dream non-productive thoughts. You can write in your mind (and most writers
do) long before putting it on paper. You can record on a hand-held tape
recorder and transcribe later. Time is no excuse.
Write in
the car, at the beach, standing on the stream bank casting for trout.
There's
only one way to be a writer, and that's to write. Write two pages—two lousy
pages —per day, and in six months you have a 360 page novel.
Like
most things we set out to do in this life, luck played a part in my selling.
But don't be discouraged if you think of yourself as unlucky. Luck, I've found,
is nothing more than the inevitable result of hard work.
The
harder you work, the luckier you get.
Now I
want to help you get lucky.
It took
eight years for lady luck to seek me out. By then, I'd had almost forty years
to harden my head. I'd read hundreds of westerns and many more novels of other
genres, and I thought I knew how it was done. But I didn't even know the
questions yet much less the answers. And for the first six years of the eight
years I wrote before I sold, I didn't bother to ask. Form rejection slips told
me I wasn't doing it right. I decided it must be a craft, kind of like painting
a picture or building a fine saddle, and I decided to learn it. So I went to
classes and conferences. Two years after we began that effort, we sold our
first novels. Six wasted years!
Kat,
who’d begun writing much later than I actually sold six weeks before I did.
I wish
I'd had this manual years ago.
The
self-satisfaction of seeing your name on the cover of your paperback at the
local market or drug store, on the jacket of a hardback in the book store, or
on the box of an audio, is well worth the effort—not to speak of the
multi-thousand dollar advances and, if you are diligent and keep after your new
trade, the continuing royalties. Many times a novel will pay off for many, many
years. In some instances, if your reputation grows, you’ll sell reprint rights
for much more than your original deal on that same novel.
For
twenty years western novels written by a Manhattan dentist sold more copies than any other book save the Holy
Bible and McGuffey's readers. Even today, fifty years after his death in 1939,
Zane Grey's work sells many, many copies a year. Today, Louis L'Amour dominates a good share of the western
novel market—look at the western section of any bookstore or the book rack in
any truck stop! L'Amour has
sold well over two hundred fifty million books.
Long
live the Kings. But Mr. Grey and Mr. L'Amour are gone,
and the throne—the western one—is vacant. And there's always room for a good
writer in any genre.
Write
the great one!
Genres,
and consumer taste, can be fickle. They can come and go.
So many
poorly represented westerns have appeared on television and movies, it has
almost destroyed the genre. Today's contemporary producers and directors
continue to try to place 20th Century values, mores, and lifestyles in the 19th
Century. They portray children as assertive and mouthy when in that era "a
child should be seen and not heard." They try to put women in business at
a time when it was commonly believed "a woman's place is in the
home." They continue to write men who swear and wear their hats inside in
the presence of women, when a man would have been horsewhipped for swearing in
front of a woman and the nearest man would have at least reminded him to remove
his hat. They write away from all of the things that attract viewers to westerns
and historicals.
But that's not to say you can't write a great and historically accurate novel
featuring a woman who rose to the top of most any profession in the 19th
Century—you can, and you can be historically correct. As long as you respect
the little things, and as long as you write her as an anomaly, outside of the
norm.
Western
and historical readers and viewers know the West and know history. They not
only read western and historical fiction, but many read and study
history—including journals and autobiographies. They know how it was in the
West, or wherever and whenever they care to study.
Writers
of both novel and film would do well to emulate them—study time and place and
write to it, not away from it.
But the
western and historical genres are also changing for the better. Women are being
written about accurately...strong, proud, women who deserve being admired and
copied for the values they portray. The Native American is coming into his own
by being accurately chronicled as proud people with values and mores that
deserve being written as they were and from a Native America point of view.
And
other minorities are finally being represented in westerns and historicals.
Accurate writers are discovering that around most any 1870's southwest cattle
drive campfire would seldom be ten whites, but rather two blacks, six
Hispanics, a Chinese cook and a white—or European, as whites were known in most
of the Americas and as they are still known to a good part of the world.
In a Publisher's
Weekly article by
Dennis E. Showalter entitled Blazing A New Trail, he maintains that
"American West themes are making a major comeback. The box-office success
of Clint Eastwood's Unforgivenhas made the western a hot Hollywood
item."
Even
though I will tell you what I feel is the easiest way to get published, and how
to "write to" what New York views as the West, there are still great
inroads to be made by writing away from these guidelines—it's just that the
risk of not getting your work sold is greater. But never write away from good
time and place—it's not good writing to do so and it's not good for the
profession—unless you’re writing a parody, such as Blazing
Saddles.
So much
for westerns and historicals.
Romance
represents 48% (or more) of the mass market paperback industry. A huge number.
Women read 80% of all the fiction written in America and buy romance in huge quantities. If you can write what
makes them laugh, makes them cry, and turns them on, you can have a piece of
this huge market, and see your romance alongside Kat's and many other fine
writers on the nation's bookracks.
L'Amour didn't get
his first novel published until he was forty-six. Mine came at forty-seven.
Yours may come at seventeen or eighty-seven.
The
first criteria for a novelist, as far as I'm concerned, is loving to read. If
you enjoy reading mystery, romance, horror, fantasy, science fiction, or
westerns, or any other genre, then I suggest you turn your writing talents to
the particular genre you love to read. You already know a lot about it—length,
structure, basic rules such as a happy ending for a romance. You may not
realize you know those things, but you do. And that's one of the reasons you
should write what you love to read.
If you
love to read novels, chances are you'll love writing them even more.
How else
could you sit back, God-like, and become a cavalry general attacking the Cheyenne or a gunslinger walking down the main street of 1880 Dodge City or Tombstone to draw down on the fastest gun in the West? How else can
you become a swash-buckling pirate or his petulant captured flame-haired
heroine?
And if
you don't like the way the action comes down, you can do it again. Writing is a
wonderful way to make all those fantastic dreams you had as a youth, or have
today, come true—at least on paper.
Dream,
and get paid for it.
I've
never been one for long, intricate, manuals which tell you every detail
necessary to accomplish a goal—although this one continues to grow. I'm
impatient. This manual is designed to give you the hard-hitting facts about
what and how. The when, why, and where is up to you.
I will
also give you a list of reference materials and books that are invaluable—and
there are thousands more equally so. After a number of years of collecting, I
have most of these mentioned in my own personal library, but all of them and
many more may be found in local lending libraries, or may be inter-branched or
inter-city borrowed.
Of
course, the web is now the ultimate research tool, and no one could have a
reference library to match it. But you have to be careful, as not all the
information you might find on the web is accurate. Anyone can post.
I've
also included a list of weekly, monthly, and bi-monthly magazines that will
help you with craft and keep you up on the marketplace. These, too, are
available at the library.
You'll
also share with me the agony of defeat. In writing, it's called a rejection
slip. But sometimes you can use them to your benefit! So if your writing glass
is half empty a rejection slip is defeat; if half full, it’s a learning
process.
With the
exception of a couple of optioned screenplays, every dime I've made writing has
been made from westerns, historical romances, historicals, suspense or thrillers, so the meat of this
manual is going to center on writing well, not writing any particular genre.
Many of the examples are from the western genre, but description from point of
view, as an example, is applicable to any genre.
I'll
show you how and why the question "How do you get your ideas?" is
such a foolish one. History, current events, your everyday life…is replete with
novel ideas, for every genre, including science fiction.
Now, sit
back, read, then do what you've always wanted to do—write a novel.
