Charlie Steel |
This is yet another book that I am especially proud
of and part of the reason is because of the unusual circumstances that brought
it to fruition. In November 2014, I was
asked by Condor Publishing, Inc. to help another author, Denis J. Harrington, complete
and rewrite a book entitled FIRE CANOE FINNEGAN. He needed a co-author.
How could I say no to a title like that? Upon reading the work, I truly liked the way Harrington
outlined the book. The very concept of steamboats
helping to supply the western movement was intriguing, as well as
original. Before reading his rough
draft, I never really thought of steamships carrying passengers, or supplying
pioneers as well as the army forts along the great Missouri River.
I began working on the book, researching and adding historical
accuracy. I corresponded with Harrington
and was pleased to be told that I had cart blanche with the manuscript. In working with my co-author, I discovered he
was a sports writer and playwright but that he had never before written a
Western. At this point in his life, he
just wanted to see the book in print. In
July of 2015, I was informed my co-author Denis J. Harrington died. The project took on a more serious tone after
that and I worked hard. It did need a
tremendous amount of work and many rewrites.
When finished with the final draft, I started the
editing process. With my editor, this
took three heated oral readings of 250 pages.
With each reading there were more changes. Then, after completion the manuscript was sent
off for a technical edit. Sad to say, it
came back with more corrections.
Finally, the manuscript was ready (or so we thought). It was sent to the computer layout person for
digital and print formatting. When the
first printed proof came back, I discovered four typos and THOSE had to be
corrected.
Condor Publishing, Inc. has always insisted on
quality over quantity. From November
2014 to November 2015, it took a full twelve months to get this book rewritten,
properly edited, and professionally formatted and published.
My publisher had the presumption to contact James
Reasoner and ask for a possible review from this very busy writer. I truly appreciate that he took the time to
read and review the book. This is what
he had to say:
“FIRE CANOE
FINNEGAN is a historical adventure novel in the grand tradition, a rousing tale
of the men who piloted steamboats up the Missouri River to the Western frontier
during the turbulent days after the Civil War.
Authors Denis J. Harrington and Charlie Steel spin a fine yarn with
plenty of action, romance, historical detail, and compelling characters. This is historical fiction at its finest and
highly recommended.” James Reasoner,
author of OUTLAW RANGER and New York Times bestselling author of The Civil War
Battle Series.
Picking an
excerpt from this book, I found to be somewhat difficult. It would be easy to pick a battle scene
between Indians and soldiers, or a fight scene between Finnegan and a Sioux
Indian. Instead, I picked a little
snippet of dialogue between the main protagonist Clint Finnegan and a pioneer
named Liver Eatin Mosely.
Found beginning
on page, 133:
“Then you were ambushed?” asked Finnegan.
Mosely nodded his head. “Sioux attacked just south of Westport Landing
in Kansas. Most everybody got burned out. The folks that survived headed for
Fort Leavenworth. All save me. I was going to California or bust
trying. So we kept on moving, looking to
hook up with another wagon train. We
wandered up this way when fever took hold of my wife. She was awful weak so I stopped here, thinkin
we’d stay till the fever quit her. But
she up and died, leavin me and the boy.”
He
closed his eyes in a prolonged silence.
“I’m real sorry to hear that,” Finnegan said quietly.
With a sigh, Mosely stared at the flames in the hearth.
“I
played the fool, and she done the paying,” he said at length. “Little John wasn’t but five. I took him everywhere, huntin, fishin,
plantin. Why, I fixed a tent from hides
and set it up alongside the wagon. We
lived there. Early one mornin a war
party jumped us. They cracked my head,
stole the mules, and fired the tent. My
boy was killed in the doing.”
Mosely’s face became an expressionless mask.
“That night I tracked them Sioux,” he continued. “I found their camp up the river. They were butcherin one of my mules. Gonna make a meal of him. I killed them all and got my mules back. I’ve been goin at it ever since.”
“Did you…take any livers?”
“Not directly.” Mosely appeared to be at ease with himself now. “I commenced that later.” He leaned across the table. “I learned about Indians from trappers
traveling the river to Omaha. They told
me what spooks them. And cuttin out their livers does that right proper. Scalpin does too.”
“How do you mean spooks them?”
“Well, Indians don’t like to lose parts.
They believe you can’t go to the spirit world if you ain’t in one
piece.”
“So why do you hang those scalps on a pole?”
“They’re hangin there for a purpose,” Mosely explained.
“Aren’t you baiting them?”
“That’s the idea,” Mosely said, his anger rising. “Young fella, this is a hard country. A man what don’t look after himself is gonna
be dead in a hurry.” He gestured toward
the woman. “She’s Pawnee. Tells me her tribes been enemies with the
plains Indians since the beginning of time. I come onto some Sioux trying to cut her up. Naturally I had to kill em.”
“I
see,” said Finnegan.
“She’s been grateful and a good friend ever since. I trust her more than I do myself.”
“Do you mind telling me why you killed that Indian tonight?”
“Nope. It’s because he’s been
trackin me for a spell.”
“Tracking you?”
“That’s a fact.” Mosely paused to
pluck a bit of gristle from between his teeth with a knife. “Like I been sayin, I’ve killed me quite a few
Sioux. And they ain’t happy about
that. I got most of the warriors skeered
of me. One of their chiefs named Hump
took to sending his best after my hair. This
fella I got tonight was one of them.”
“Did you cut out his liver?”
“I did. And I tossed his
body yonder over the fence. They’ll drag it off
come mornin.”
“Wha…what did you do with the liver?”
“I
gave it to the wolf. He eats them.” Mosely grinned. “You look a bit pale, Clint. Off your feed, are you?”
“You’re a hard man, Ab Mosely,” said Finnegan. “So you cut their livers out just to spook them?”
“Yup,
that I do. Hate those Indians that
killed my son with a passion. Pacho feels the same. That’s why I do it. I hear they claim I’m an evil spirit. To sum
it up, they ain’t real anxious to fret me none.”
“I’m thinking you’re lucky you lived this long.”
“Tell the truth, I don’t care one way or t’other.”
“I
have a question to ask you,” said Finnegan.
“Go ahead.”
“Did you happen to see the payroll thieves?”
“Maybe I seen them,” said Mosely.
“Really?”
Finnegan stiffened.
“I
said maybe. Two men was they?”
“Yes.”
“And
a woman?” Mosely’s eyes narrowed. “She one
of the robbers?”
“No.
They kidnapped her.”
“Pretty
is she?”
“Sure
as the sun rises.”
Mosely chuckled. “Could be you want to find her more than you
do that payroll?”
Finnegan looked away and said nothing.
Well, that’s one excerpt from the book that I hope you find
somewhat interesting. I also hope I did
Mr. Denis J. Harrington a good deed and that he is looking down on me
kindly. It is my fervent desire that
everyone will enjoy this book.
All my best to all readers and fellow writers.
Charlie Steel
Charlie Steel
Charlie, that looks like an excellent read! I love learning history while being entertained, and this looks like one of those books that would do just that. That was a really good excerpt you posted, and wow, what a great review!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Cheryl.
ReplyDeleteI've got to read this book, Charlie. The excerpt is intriguing, but the story behind the story makes the book all that more special.
ReplyDeleteMay Mr. Harrington rest in peace. You did him proud, my friend. :-)
Thank you, Kathleen. This is very kind of you.
DeleteGreat excerpt, has me hooked. Congratulations on the publication. As Kathleen said, you did Mr. Harrington proud.
ReplyDeleteLivia,
DeleteWow! How great to have you comment on my blog. Thank you! I pray that Mr. Harrington will be pleased and that his widow will ultimately benefit.
An intriguing project, Charlie. If the excerpt is representative of the rest of the tale, it sounds like a winner. Terrific dialogue--realistic and easy to follow.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tom.
DeleteI was looking for your friendly face. I'm hoping this one takes off. It certainly represents a tremendous amount of care and work.