Monday, January 28, 2013

Review Roundup: Blood, Blood, and More Blood

Wolf Creek: Book 2
Kiowa Vengeance

By Ford Fargo
Western Fictioneers, November 2012
$8.99 paperback, ISBN 1480238376
$2.99 Kindle, ASIN B00A4FO8DQ
138 pages

Several months after an outlaw raid left the residents of Wolf Creek, Kansas, bloodied but not broken (Wolf Creek Book 1: Bloody Trail), a band of renegade Kiowa hits the warpath just as the main body of the tribe is about to talk peace with the army at a nearby fort. The renegades, a brutal, savage bunch, spare no one as they cut a swath across the prairie on a collision course with a town woefully unprepared to fend off a full-scale Indian attack.

Book 2 in the Wolf Creek series might be subtitled “Blood All Over the Place.” In chapters penned by (in order) Bill Crider, Jackson Lowry, Kerry Newcomb, Troy D. Smith, Frank Roderus, and Robert J. Randisi, readers are sucked right into the action by new characters and a couple of favorites from the previous volume. Danger is more palpable in this novel; the pacing much quicker. Readers whose pulse doesn’t pound for a good portion of the tale might want to make sure their scalp is still intact.

Without exception, the new characters in Kiowa Vengeance are fascinating. No one is what he or she seems, and that ought to make for some interesting stories in future books. Keep an eye on Wilson Marsh, who emerges as the sort of oily slug it’s easy to detest. There are precious few glimmers of deeper humanity in that character, so one wonders where he may go from here.

The resolution seems a tad too easy, but by then readers will be thankful for a reprieve from non-stop action. Kiowa Vengeance is great fun on both emotional and intellectual levels.

Kane’s Redemption
By Cheryl Pierson
Western Trail Blazer, January 2012
$7.95 paperback, ISBN 1469971895
$2.99 Kindle, ASIN B0072FW5TA
100 pages

Kane’s Promise
By Cheryl Pierson
Western Trail Blazer, June 2012
$7.95 paperback, ISBN 1477667032
$2.99 Kindle, ASIN B008BTUB3S
94 pages

A 10-year-old boy witnesses the brutal murder of his family during an Apache raid on their homestead. Taken captive by the Indians, Will Green resigns himself to torture and death, only to be rescued by a mysterious, haunted man whom he grows to love.

Readers avoid stories for all sorts of reasons, most of them idiosyncratic. For me, two things that engender a healthy amount of skepticism and avoidance are first-person narration and stories told from a child’s point of view. I’ve seen far too many authors handle both badly, at least in my opinion.

With that bias in mind, I was stunned to find myself captured by the first two novellas in Cheryl Pierson’s Kane series. Pierson falls into none of the major traps often presented by first-person narration and children’s perspective. Will’s voice is enchanting: honest, determined, confused, desperate, vulnerable, and amusing. He leaps right off the page and into the reader’s heart almost immediately—the type of kid one wants to hug and throttle, sometimes simultaneously. At his best, Will evokes comparisons to Mark Twain’s Tom Sawyer and Huckleberry Finn: an old soul in a child’s body, covering vulnerability with bravado.

Though both novellas are packed with grit and action, one of the of the most striking things about the Kane stories is Will’s gradual realization that “family” can be an evolving concept. Will loved his slain parents and sister, and he remembers them mostly with fondness. Not until he begins to bond with the titular character, Jacobi Kane, though, does he begin to acknowledge his family had as many warts as any other. Will’s father was a good man and a good father, but according to Will, Pa Green considered even minor displays of affection unmanly. That throws Will, at first.

Larger-than-life Jacobi Kane never misses an opportunity to pat Will on the head or offer a kind word. Kane has suffered enormous losses, too, and he imposes artificial distance between himself and the boy. With a child’s guileless frankness, Will sees through the effort, and watching the two wounded characters grow into a new kind of family is heartwarming.

Kathleen Rice Adams is a Texan, a voracious reader, a professional journalist, and a novelist in training. She purchased Kane’s Redemption and received review copies of Kiowa Vengeance and Kane’s Promise from the publisher and author, respectively. Her opinions are her own and are neither endorsed nor necessarily supported by Western Fictioneers or individual members of the organization.


  1. "Blood All Over the Place!" Ha! We may have to use that title for the sequel!

  2. Kathleen,
    Thank you so much for that wonderful review of Kane's Redemption. I had a lot of reservations about writing that book and the following ones, as well, because of the same things you mentioned--having read a lot of books that are written from the child's pov that are not all that great and the 1st person, pov as well, made me wonder if I could pull it off. Book three, Kane's Destiny, will be out in the next few weeks.I am so glad to know how much you enjoyed these stories, and that it all came out okay in the end, writing-wise.

    "Blood All Over the Place"...GREAT TITLE--I agree with Troy, that would be a good one to use for the sequel. LOL I, too, enjoyed Kiowa Vengeance. It kept me turning pages, for sure, and looking forward to seeing what was going to happen in book 3.

  3. Great reviews, Kathleen! Thanks for the warning about "Kiowa" too. I'll keep a mop handy. ;-)

  4. What a nice review of Kane's redemption. I enjoyed reading it as well.

  5. Thanks, Maggie! I'm so glad you liked it.

  6. Non stop action. Larger than life.
    What better reviews can one ask for?
    I enjoyed it Kathleen.
    Jerry Guin

  7. Excellent reviews and honest! I couldn't agree more.
    Thanks so much, Kathleen. Definitely looking forward to your next posts.

  8. Oopsie! A whole herd of y'all sneaked up on me while my back was turned. That'll learn me. :-D

    Glad y'all enjoyed the reviews. All three books are well worth reading. The Wolf Creek books are endlessly entertaining. In some very good ways, they remind me of the old western TV shows from my childhood (think The Lone Ranger, Paladin, and the like). Tough customers and gluttons for punishment, those Wolf Creek denizens. ;-)

    Kane's Redemption just goes to show that sometimes risks result in rewards for everybody involved: characters, authors, and readers. :-)

  9. Book 2 of Wolf Creek is next on my reading list, so forewarned is forearmed. :)

    As for first person--good writing is good writing whether it's first or third, so I'm not surprised Cheryl pulled it off well.

    I'm really enjoying your reviews, Tex. Nothing like a little straight talk. :)

  10. Aw. Thanks, Trail Boss! You know us Texans: We're genetically programmed to keep talkin', no matter how hard it is to get them words out around a dang boot. ;-)

  11. Sounds like a great book, Kathleen. I'm heading to Amazon for my copy.

  12. I so agreed with Kathleen's review. Love Will and Jacobi Kane! Keep those stories coming, Cheryl.

  13. Jacquie,

    THANK YOU. That is really nice of you to say, and I appreciate it. I don't know where this story came from, but I'm glad it did. I really enjoyed writing it.


  14. Thank you, Caroline! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

  15. Thank you for the informative reviews. Most appreciated.

  16. For a book written by a bunch of western writers (getting writers to cooperate is kinda like herding cats) Kiowa Vengeance is of superior ilk. IMHO. :)