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I’ve established
in previous essays that early days in the lawman profession can be pretty lean,
often requiring another job on the side. For a time, my wife and I managed a
ranch in exchange for rent.
Always rushed for
time, I’d get home from my deputy marshal work and shuck my coat, tie and
pistol like Clark Kent running for a phone booth so I could change into a pair
of jeans, chaps and a brush-popper shirt. I kept a pair of boots beside the
door. They were tall things, Tony Lama buckaroos with spurs I left on the heel
shelf and plenty of caked manure on the sole. The light was always fading by
the time I saddled my horse and rode out to check the cow-calf pairs in the
back pasture.
One cold and windy
Halloween, I heard a knock at the front door about the time I tied on my wild
rag scarf—no bandana for me, no sir—and snugged down the stampede string on my silver
belly Resistol. I pulled open the door to find a lady from church who was
dropping by to pick up my wife and kids for a carnival.
“Oh,” she said, eyeing
me from boot to hat. “You’re dressing up as a cowboy.”
“No, ma’am,” I
said. “I’m just going to feed the cows.”
My wife just
chuckled that her friend thought I was wearing a costume as she herded our
pirate, princess, and Lion King out the door. If memory serves, my bride was a
gypsy, or maybe a belly dancer. It was pretty much the same costume but I was
partial to the version with more bangles and less silk.
I’ve never really
been much on Halloween—except for the that belly dancer costume.
I once thought I’d
like to try my hand at writing a screenplay—but then I found out how sparse
that sort of writing was. I prefer the novel, where I can be director,
cinematographer, set designer and costumer. What a character wears goes a long
way toward defining him or her. Think Clint Eastwood’s serape, James Bond’s
iconic tuxedo, Indiana Jones’s battered fedora or the unblocked crown of
Captain Woodrow Call’s hat. Ann Bancroft’s leopard-skin coat and undies in The
Graduate sure say something about Mrs. Robinson’s character. The character of Sandy in GREASE goes from
virginal poodle skirts to skintight black leather by the end of the play/movie.
When we see a certain style of clothing, we expect a personality to go along
with it.
I have a good
friend who worked as an undercover drug agent in Texas nearly three decades
ago. As part of his persona he shaved his head and had a makeup artist give him
full-sleeve tattoos as well as a couple on his neck and face. This was before
body art had inched a little more main stream. It so happened that he was
buying a house in the small town where we’d grown up. From his internal point
of view, he was the same sweet-hearted copper with a wife and two little girls
who liked soccer and good barbecue. He was talking to the realtor in front of
his new home when an elderly neighbor walked up and threatened to burn the
house to the ground before he watched outlaw bikers to move next door.
I noticed early in
my law enforcement career that the public reacted pretty consistently to the
way responding officers were dressed—particularly our hats.
As a patrol officer I was issued a
round uniform hat like the ones Reed and Malloy wore in Adam 12. We hated those
hats. When I went into mounted patrol my uniform was the same grey shirt but
added starched black Wranglers and highly polished boots with chrome spurs. We
wore a black felt Resistol hat in the winter and a white straw in the
summer. On our horses we felt ten feet
tall and bullet proof. When the weather
was too bad to ride we wore the same uniform, responding in our patrol truck
instead of on horseback. No matter how many responding officers outranked us at
any call, citizens always turned to us as soon as we arrived. The guys in the
big hats had to be the ones in charge—even absent our mounts.
If
I’ve done things right in my books, readers would recognize Jericho Quinn by
his armored black motorcycle jacket—and in TIME OF ATTACK, Ayako Shimizu’s outfits
directly illustrate her character. Here are two short descriptions— one shortly
after Quinn first meets her and another, later after she has developed feelings
for Quinn.
--The short skirt, white blouse and knee
socks were meant to replicate the look of a Japanese schoolgirl—a popular
fantasy for Japanese men who hired prostitutes. Quinn couldn’t help but notice
that the socks were a little too large for her tiny feet and the heels hung out
of the back of her slippers. She was still able to carry off the costume, but
Quinn could make out the tiniest of lines around her smallish mouth. Wide,
chocolate eyes, though attractive in their own way, held a weary look that
liner and makeup could not hide.—
And later--
---“I
got mintaiko,” she said. “Spiced cod roe. We are known for it here in
Fukuoka.”
“Sounds
delicious.” Quinn couldn’t help but smile as he watched Ayako putter around the
simple wooden counter that served as a kitchen in the small cottage. Her hair
still hung in damp locks from her shopping trip in the morning rain. She’d
slipped off her wet sweat pants and jacket to reveal a pink Hello Kitty t-shirt
and loose violet gym shorts that matched the slippers she’d brought in the
duffle from her apartment.
The
softness of the colors reminded Quinn of an Easter egg. He wondered if she
realized that though she worked each day to make herself alluring with costumes
and makeup, it was now, fresh from the rain and dressed in plain t-shirt and
shorts that her natural beauty shown through.
Perhaps,
Quinn thought, she knew exactly what she was doing, and had expertly dialed in
on what Quinn found attractive.—
Marc Cameron is a retired Chief Deputy US Marshal and 29-year law enforcement veteran. His short stories have appeared in BOYS’ LIFE Magazine and the Saturday Evening Post. He's published ten novels, six of them Westerns.
TIME OF ATTACK, fourth in his USA Today Bestselling Jericho Quinn Thriller series, is the newest release from Kensington February of 2014.
Marc lives in Alaska with his beautiful bride and BMW motorcycle.
Visit him at:
www.marccameronbooks.com
http://www.facebook.com/MarcCameronAuthor
I've heard it said that Clothes make the man. Guess you could say that it gives people an attitude about a person. I want to get your books now that I've discovered you.
ReplyDeleteEntertaining post. Dressing characters is one of my favorite parts of writing. You can explain a lot with a description of garb.
ReplyDeleteMarc, as always a wonderful, interesting, and informative post. I'm never disappointed--even without the pictures! LOL Like you, I'm finding that screenplay writing is not what I enjoy doing. I like doing it ALL in my writing, and that is, as you say, too sparse.
ReplyDeleteYou've made me think, now. I'm not sure that I give enough detail to what my characters are wearing at any given time...I'm going to have to pay more attention to that.
Great post. I really enjoyed it.
Cheryl
Wonderfull post. I truly enjoyed every word. Thank you for your insights and information. Doris
ReplyDeleteJust got back into wifi range a few hours ago. Thanks for the comments.
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I have to admit, dressing my characters always happens last, and only when my critique partners holler at me for having nekkid people running around. I have been teased about this for many years. Maybe it's because I never pay attention--it's when something is different or unexpected. That, I notice. But it has to be on the page. I get that. Good article, Marc.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jacquie. Yep, nekkid characters would draw attention. I still leave quite a bit to the imagination though and let the reader fill in the blanks. I think that's why we always like the book better than the movie...
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